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Rework the draft

How-to

For anyone whose first draft is close but not quite right.

Shorter, then + Question: each rework is a numbered version you can flip back to.
  • Six one-click reworks under the draft: Shorter, Punchier, Softer pitch, Bolder, More human and + Question, which ends on a short, real question. Each keeps the core point and lands as a new version.
  • Versions are numbered under Fresh take; click a number to flip back. Riff keeps up to nine per post, then drops the oldest.
  • Riff again writes a new angle from scratch, with a different opening move from the last few.
  • Edit by hand. Click into the draft and type. The character ring and the Fresh score follow your edits.
  • Stop mid-stream with Esc or the Stop button. What's there is kept as a version marked "stopped early".

The line under the draft names the play used, like Play: Problem → fix, and the rework applied.